8.2 Reflection on Project 2 Draft

I peer reviewed Felicia Maldonado and Andrew Rocha drafts.


From reading Felicia's draft, I learned that her topic is about the controversy of excessive/reasonable force by police. She specifically talks about John Wihbey and Leighton Walter Kille. I agree that police officers tend to abuse their power and use excessive force on innocent victims. From reading Andrew's draft, I learned that his topic is about Mansuripur's Research Paper. Overall, both of them did a very good job with their first drafts! There were a few things they needed to fix but once they correct them I know that their essays will be very good!